Let's take a look at her poem An Eye for an Eye. I chose this one because I really liked it, but there were so many that I could have chosen.
An Eye for an Eye
An eye for an eye is a nasty idea –
escalation of evil always follows.
To turn the other cheek is an improvement,
though not perfect in many ways:
weakness is often met with aggression.
You gasp, as it takes strength to stay mute.
But respond with a kindness – a viable proposition -
arouse his remorse and change his heart.
The poem has a good message, don't you think. Thanks, Viv, for being a part of our community, and for sharing your poetry with us
If you've enjoyed this poem, I hope you will all look around at other poems in Viv's blog.
Posted for Poets United by Mary Kling who blogs at In the Corner of My Eye.
escalation of evil always follows.
To turn the other cheek is an improvement,
though not perfect in many ways:
weakness is often met with aggression.
You gasp, as it takes strength to stay mute.
But respond with a kindness – a viable proposition -
arouse his remorse and change his heart.
The poem has a good message, don't you think. Thanks, Viv, for being a part of our community, and for sharing your poetry with us
If you've enjoyed this poem, I hope you will all look around at other poems in Viv's blog.
Posted for Poets United by Mary Kling who blogs at In the Corner of My Eye.

Mary, I am astonished! It's true that poem was written from the heart, as was today's anti-war poem, but you do me too much honour! Thank you, all the same.
ReplyDeleteYes, a very good message! Ad I like the uncompromising language.
ReplyDeleteThis is a wonderful message and I like having a third choice. This poem reminds me how many evil people have quoted the eye for an eye.
ReplyDeleteWow, Viv, great message and thanks for the wonderful pick, Mary. I needed the lift in this poem today! Thank you both.
ReplyDeleteGood to see Viv featured here, I always enjoy my visits to her blog. :-)
ReplyDeleteNice to see Viv's work here! I love her style and need to visit her more often~ Well Done
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