tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4139625267522039683.post3140266213401165317..comments2023-11-05T07:53:12.708-05:00Comments on Poets United: Verse First ~ Close to The SourceRosemary Nissen-Wadehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4139625267522039683.post-56793275938027131782013-07-26T04:44:57.743-04:002013-07-26T04:44:57.743-04:00One poem from the group-owned Carbon Noise Poetry....One poem from the group-owned Carbon Noise Poetry. Come have a peek and a pastry.K. Shawn Edgarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05343510166342204450noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4139625267522039683.post-45030606887074894652013-07-26T04:39:31.129-04:002013-07-26T04:39:31.129-04:00I bark at bees. Hope their hive is not near.I bark at bees. Hope their hive is not near.K. Shawn Edgarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05343510166342204450noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4139625267522039683.post-47545822289784942042013-07-25T14:45:42.828-04:002013-07-25T14:45:42.828-04:00Kim - I had the idea this morning and you inspire ...Kim - I had the idea this morning and you inspire me to put pen to paper. A useful exercise that we all need<br />thanksAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13414513238308254080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4139625267522039683.post-46159240347757754862013-07-25T06:41:33.964-04:002013-07-25T06:41:33.964-04:00I don't know whether my poem is opt for the pr...I don't know whether my poem is opt for the prompt or not <br />but what I felt...I wrote<br />Hope you all like PThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09777057015005418560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4139625267522039683.post-5888437301836738472013-07-25T06:39:17.319-04:002013-07-25T06:39:17.319-04:00Hafta admit, I didn't write mine specially for...Hafta admit, I didn't write mine specially for this prompt, but I think it fits.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4139625267522039683.post-66048406891328077262013-07-25T03:03:07.261-04:002013-07-25T03:03:07.261-04:00I am at a conference, in my dorm room--much more l...I am at a conference, in my dorm room--much more luxurious than I am used to at Quaker gatherings!Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4139625267522039683.post-80060226531183036212013-07-24T22:42:53.890-04:002013-07-24T22:42:53.890-04:00Hi Poets! I thought I'd give this one a go :DHi Poets! I thought I'd give this one a go :DEllahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4139625267522039683.post-23423540086689353062013-07-24T19:23:55.833-04:002013-07-24T19:23:55.833-04:00Thanks, Eileen.....I now have the correct link!Thanks, Eileen.....I now have the correct link!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4139625267522039683.post-27884589053334306262013-07-24T18:08:18.434-04:002013-07-24T18:08:18.434-04:00Mary,
I have tried to link to your post here, but...Mary,<br /><br />I have tried to link to your post here, but at this time, it states that the page does not exist...I have left a comment at a previous poem and can see via the Blog Roll menu, that I can link to your poem that way!!!<br />Off to read...<br />EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4139625267522039683.post-90389396357854293762013-07-24T18:04:06.287-04:002013-07-24T18:04:06.287-04:00Kim,
I have actually made some minor changes to t...Kim,<br /><br />I have actually made some minor changes to this poem , since first posting it....<br /><br />EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4139625267522039683.post-46243750685176159242013-07-24T17:18:11.822-04:002013-07-24T17:18:11.822-04:00I did my own interpretation of the prompt....liste...I did my own interpretation of the prompt....listening to my muse. I am on my way now to read others' work, to see what YOU have done.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4139625267522039683.post-62164085424096787382013-07-24T16:06:57.873-04:002013-07-24T16:06:57.873-04:00Have to run, but will be back later to read and co...Have to run, but will be back later to read and comment. Thanks Kim, your prompt helped to focus an idea that had been drifting around for a few days. Welcomed inspiration,<br /><br />ElizabethAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4139625267522039683.post-63646984353370219602013-07-24T15:32:24.185-04:002013-07-24T15:32:24.185-04:00Kim,
I am slowly adjusting to being back home and...Kim,<br /><br />I am slowly adjusting to being back home and into a routine, after my holiday to Portugal & Spain. So many inspiring memories:)<br /><br />Back to writing with a rather creepy response to your interesting prompt....<br /><br />EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4139625267522039683.post-77102855929290753052013-07-24T15:29:06.383-04:002013-07-24T15:29:06.383-04:00Well.... I must admit I'm not sure I understoo...Well.... I must admit I'm not sure I understood the prompt, but hey here I am to enjoy your good poetry<br />Thank you<br />D.Dulcehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08109609856487463466noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4139625267522039683.post-71170717860773592032013-07-24T14:23:36.063-04:002013-07-24T14:23:36.063-04:00Thanks Kim maybe that Banana spider in my yard wil...Thanks Kim maybe that Banana spider in my yard will inspire me!<br />They say she is an orb one like Charlotte. I guess they call her the writing spider ;D<br /><br />Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4139625267522039683.post-23892920305669014732013-07-24T13:42:32.890-04:002013-07-24T13:42:32.890-04:00Okay, I think I got it backwards, oh wellOkay, I think I got it backwards, oh wellAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4139625267522039683.post-87394129979399126172013-07-24T13:37:50.925-04:002013-07-24T13:37:50.925-04:00lovely indeedlovely indeedVandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4139625267522039683.post-7561027568174398272013-07-24T12:45:47.372-04:002013-07-24T12:45:47.372-04:00Hi Kim~ I just happened to write my submission thi...Hi Kim~ I just happened to write my submission this morning from a dream I had. Felt like it fit the prompt though. aka_andreahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15388010898688586760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4139625267522039683.post-56901436872653000052013-07-24T12:43:25.106-04:002013-07-24T12:43:25.106-04:00Dear Kim,
I tried to update my latest poem based o...Dear Kim,<br />I tried to update my latest poem based on your post here. Would appreciate your feedback how to improve my 'Time Marker'. I need to be more adventurous in my writing.ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4139625267522039683.post-62518398873073847842013-07-24T11:09:15.335-04:002013-07-24T11:09:15.335-04:00This is interesting! calls to invite an element of...This is interesting! calls to invite an element of prose, perhaps. Running a schedule now not sure of making it. but will try.TCPChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01735466017293465064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4139625267522039683.post-1045318064873508582013-07-24T10:10:40.719-04:002013-07-24T10:10:40.719-04:00Ah, Kim, I will write this from my "vacation....Ah, Kim, I will write this from my "vacation." Hope all is going well. (You haven't visited me in months, maybe years!)Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4139625267522039683.post-86404420258392907152013-07-24T06:42:21.539-04:002013-07-24T06:42:21.539-04:00If you want concise may a suggest a form that requ...If you want concise may a suggest a form that requires getting the most mileage for your word choices. Google Ginsberg's American Sentence. You'll find at least 3 examples of mine own on my blog. Looking forward to the exerise.LaTonya Baldwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17837979981517423142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4139625267522039683.post-78242556373287534322013-07-24T06:11:37.651-04:002013-07-24T06:11:37.651-04:00Kim,
This is key to excellent writing, and the par...Kim,<br />This is key to excellent writing, and the part that I feel, I aspire to, but fail at, miserably.<br /><br />Your prompt today will inspire me.ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.com