There are times when the words won’t come, when our cupboards
are empty, and there is not even a bare old bone for the dog to be had. I had
such a time in
2016, and our friend, Elizabeth Crawford, who writes
at Soul's
Music, offered me a step by step exercise in how to write a poem when you’re blocked. As I followed the steps, and produced a
poem, it occurred to me that this info might be very handy for many of you. So
we did a
chat
about it. Recently, I was looking through some of the chats we have done here
at Poets United, and happened upon it again. I thought it might be nice to
re-visit this exercise, for those of you who are more recent members. And those
of us who have been around a while can always benefit from a refresher. Let’s
dive in!
Elizabeth: How about I walk you through a step by
step process of building a poem? Giving you the steps one at a time, maybe
three or four steps.
First step is a stream of consciousness list. But
you must make some preparation. Make sure you are in a place and time where you
won’t be interrupted. Have clean paper and pen. Have some kind of timer near at
hand and set it for five minutes. Sit down and relax. Breathe in through your
nose, then slowly release it through your mouth as though you are blowing out a
candle gently. Do that three times. It is a signal to your subconscious that
you are ready to begin.
Sherry: Ready!
Let it float through your mind and begin your list.
One or two words, a short phrase, whatever comes into your head. Try to be
specific. Use actual names of whatever you see or feel coming at you. People,
places, feelings, things, animals….whatever. Continue to write for as long as
you can, but for no more than five minutes. No going back to look before you
are finished. This is a stream of thoughts, associations, reflections,
feelings, nothing more. No sentences, just a few words to remind you.
When we originally did the exercise, I chose your two words very deliberately because you use them more than any others to define
your own person, so I knew you wouldn’t have a difficult time relating to them
and would have a wealth of material to choose from. I also knew it would make
you laugh and that in turn would relax you and make it far easier to write.)
Sherry: At my end, I followed Elizabeth’s
instructions to the letter. She sent me the word and it made me smile. It was “Wild”.
I started writing and word after word flowed across the page. In four minutes I
had written 27 phrases!
I was amazed. Since I was not inspired, not writing
at all at that moment, that week, that month, I was impressed at how this
process revealed itself to be so productive. This is when I began to think, if
an actual poem resulted from this exercise, we would bring it to you to help
you through your own thorny moments.
I emailed Elizabeth. What’s next?
Elizabeth: Another word, of course. And the same process
repeated with the second word. I will send the word separately, so you can do
it at your own convenience. Follow the same instructions that you used for the
first word. Just jot down impressions, associations, memories, images, colors,
feelings…..
Sherry: I dutifully printed off the second word,
eyes averted, and set it aside till I had some time.
The second word was: “Woman”. LOL.
I cracked up! I did my five minutes of
word-gathering. Along trotted the words, like eager little puppies. I dutifully
wrote them down. Not inspired. Just whatever came: seventeen phrases, full of
wildness. I was rather thrilled.
Elizabeth: Next Step: Take each of your lists
created from the words and study them. Choose three to five from each list that
best illustrate your personal sense of the word itself. Sense imagery is best,
what we can touch, feel, taste and smell. But don’t eliminate something that
you respond to strongly because it doesn’t seem like sense imagery. This is
your poem, your words, thoughts and ideas. Choose items from both lists that
best express that reality.
Sherry: I went back and looked at my lists. I took
those words and phrases that spoke to me most strongly, and listed them on a
separate page from top to bottom, with lots of space around each. I was ready.
It was Go-Time.
Elizabeth: The next step is the first line of
the poem…..using the two words. Your first line is:
This poem is a wild woman…
And, yes, it may take the boomerang form, or go
wherever you wish, using some or all of those items you got from your
list. Above all…have fun.
Sherry: I
applied myself to my list. What emerged on the page was a first draft. Then it
was time to get serious. I didn’t have to work very hard before the
poem was complete. A poem I was pleased with – and rather amazed by -
emerged easily after the requisite trying, discarding and substituting of any repeated
words.
Wow.
Poet friends, this process absolutely works. We are
excited to share this with you again, in hopes it may spark some poems when you need
a little nudge.
Thank you, Elizabeth, for sharing your wisdom and
techniques, for the love of poetry. You are a wonder. And thank you, Sister
Wild Woman, for all these years we have
been so privileged to read your wonderful and amazing poems and chat with you about your dragons!
Elizabeth: Sherry, I haven’t been writing
anything new for months. Thanks for this reminder and shoulder tap of
invitation. My focus has been completely absorbed by the manuscript I'm working on.
I’ve had a
few things pop into my head that might go in the direction of poetry, but
dismiss them because of that other Call. I just want to thank you for this
opportunity to remember that I am a whole lot more than a “Book Maker.”
Sherry: Indeed you are. You are a very talented poet, and teacher. Thanks for a second look at this highly effective guide for writing a poem when we're blocked.
We hope you enjoyed this, poet friends, and find it useful. Do come back and see who we talk to next. Who knows? It might be you!















