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Rabu, 1 April 2015

Poets United Midweek Motif ~ Cherry Blossoms



sing 12
photo by Totomai
What a strange thing!
to be alive
beneath cherry blossoms.


In the cherry blossom's shade
there's no such thing
as a stranger.


Everyone feels grief
when cherry blossoms scatter.
Might they then be tears–
those drops of moisture falling
in the gentle rains of spring? 


surprise
photo by Totomai




Midweek Motif ~ Cherry Blossoms


Cherry blossoms mean springtime and cherries in summer, yum!  They also stand in for clouds, impermanence, beauty and sadness and more.  We can travel on their petals. Today we have been blessed with amazing photos of the blossoms by Totomai Martinez who featured them in his blog last Friday: SakuraThere you will find his recommendations for Cherry blossom contemplation (Hanami) in Japan.  The poems above are in the Japanese poetic forms of haiku and tanka.



bloom
photo by Totomai

Your Challenge:  Build a poem with Cherry blossoms as your central image or recurring motif.  If you use a photograph, be sure to credit the photographer.



sakura
photo by Totomai

BY W. D. SNODGRASS
The green catalpa tree has turned
All white; the cherry blooms once more.   
In one whole year I haven’t learned   
A blessed thing they pay you for.   
The blossoms snow down in my hair;   
The trees and I will soon be bare.
. . . .  
(read the rest HERE at the Poetry Foundation)




On this first day of spring, snow
covers the fruit trees, mingling improbably   
with the new blossoms like identical twins   
brought up in different hemispheres.   
It is not what Housman meant
when he wrote of the cherry
hung with snow, though he also knew   
how death can mistake the seasons,
. . . . 
(Read the rest HERE at the Poetry Foundatiuon)



For those who are new to Poets United: 
  • Post your Cherry Blossom poem on your site, and then link it here.
  • Share only original and new work written for this challenge. 
  • If you use a picture include its link.  
  • Please leave a comment here and visit and comment on our poems.
(Our next Midweek Motif is "enlightenment.")
Oh, yes!  Today is the first day of National Poetry Month in the USA, Canada and a few other countries.  Good luck to all of you who are accepting a challenge to write a poem a day during April.  I am going to try with help from prompts at Poetic AsidesNaPoWriMoMagaly Guerrero  and Imaginary Garden with Real Toads.  We'd love to know if you are attempting the challenge.  Please share links to the sites you are using for prompts and community during the challenge. Thanks!  ~Susan for Poets United
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Jumaat, 19 April 2013

I Wish I'd Written This


Four Tanka
By Matsukaze


by evening
our outdoor-selves zipped
within thick
sleeping bags. near a fire
we speak mountains and mist



with his Giaconda smile
my reflection
ties a bushel of thoughts tight
with rubberbands
and silence



behind
dark curtains
a cool
room of stretched shadows
and his slow breathing



on this Nerudaian-evening
his voice,
whispering leaves as
he tells me of his departure--
in the distance a crying train.



I belong to several haiku and tanka groups on facebook, in one of which, Five Line Poems, I encountered this poet. There are many good poets in that group, but this man's work consistently delights me. So much so that I didn't pick out one special poem; I wish I'd written most of those I've seen, so I just went to the group and grabbed the most recent four.  (I thought I should give you more than one, as tanka are so short.)

He blogs as Matsukaze, at bamboo songs (tanka) and Blues for Haikai (senryu). You're liable to find some haiku there too. On facebook he posts under his own name, Orrin T PreJean, and his profile tells me that, among other things, he is a male alto counter-tenor.




Poems and photos used in ‘I Wish I’d Written This’ remain the property of the copyright holders (usually their authors).

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