"A few hours'
mountain climbing make of a rogue and a saint
two fairly equal
creatures."
"I just want to
do God's will. And He's allowed me to go up to the mountain.
And I've looked over.
And I've seen the Promised Land."
Midweek Motif ~ Mountain
Mountains draw me to them, perhaps because I was born in
the shadow of the Catskill Mountains and played on mountain sides as
a child. Heights and metaphors both scared me at one time, but I never
could stay away. Can you?
Challenge: Let's take each other into the mountains with this
week's new poem ~ or at least onto one "mountain" of your choice.
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BY LI PO
TRANSLATED BY SAM HAMILL
The
birds have vanished down the sky.
Now
the last cloud drains away.
We
sit together, the mountain and me,
until
only the mountain remains.
Li
Po, “Zazen on Ching-t’ing Mountain,” translated by Sam Hamill from Crossing the Yellow River:
Three Hundred Poems from the Chinese. Copyright © 2000 by Sam
Hamill.
excerpt from Chattanooga
BY ISHMAEL REED
1
Some say that Chattanooga is the
Old name for Lookout Mountain
To others it is an uncouth name
Used only by the uncivilised
Our a-historical period sees it
As merely a town in Tennessee
To old timers of the Volunteer State
Chattanooga is “The Pittsburgh of
The South”
According to the Cherokee
Chattanooga is a rock that
Comes to a point
They’re all right
Chattanooga is something you
Can have anyway you want it
The summit of what you are
I’ve paid my fare on that
Mountain Incline #2, Chattanooga
I want my ride up
I want Chattanooga
. . . .
(Read the rest HERE at the Poetry Foundation.)
I go to the mountain side
of the house to cut saplings,
and clear a view to snow
on the mountain. But when I look up,
saw in hand, I see a nest clutched in
the uppermost branches.
I don’t cut that one.
I don’t cut the others either.
Suddenly, in every tree,
an unseen nest
where a mountain
would be.
for Drago Štambuk
[Used here without
permission.] Tess Gallagher, "Choices" from Midnight Lantern:New and Selected
Poems.
Copyright © 2011
by Tess Gallagher. Reprinted by permission of Graywolf Press.
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in the spirit of the
community.
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(Next week,
Sumana's Midweek Motif will be Courage.
)
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Hey everyone,
ReplyDeleteWoooo hoooo its time for Midweek Motif :D sharing my poem "Mountain of Ice." Hope you all like it. As always thanks for inspiring us Susan :D
Lots of love,
Sanaa
Love sent right back, Sanaa. You make Ice desirable.
DeleteThank you Susan :D :D
DeleteThank you for making the hills alive - not sure we are saints but we clamber up a few mountains ;)
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely, Jae Rose, we definitely cannot avoid our peaks and valleys. Glad you are here.
DeleteGood Wednesday to everyone! I hope by the end of this week we have a 'mountain' of poetry here to read. Thanks for the prompt, Susan.
ReplyDeleteIt feels like a fine anthology each week. Happy day, Mary. Thank you for Poets United!
DeleteThank you for the prompt, Susan. Looking forward to this week's poems!
ReplyDeleteWelcome, Nicholas!
DeleteGood morning, Poets United! I was up late trying to reduce the mountain of things in my suitcase to a more reasonable size. The choices one has to make when traveling! But now I have coffee in hand and I'm ready for the anthology of mountain poems you create for this prompt. What a beautiful sunny day!
ReplyDeleteHello everyone! thank goodness I was able to write this this week. It is about two mountains I've known in life. I will be stopping by everyone's poems this evening as I have a lot of homework to do right now! Peace out!
ReplyDeleteGlad you could make it, James, and leave us such an amazing poem.
DeleteGood morning, friends. A mountain of longing seemed to well up with this prompt......safe travels, Susan, and enjoy every minute of your wonderful writer's retreat. I am down-Island this morning to see a doctor, but will make my rounds as I travel, on my spiffy xmas tablet!
ReplyDeleteA Christmas tablet is like a flying carpet, isn't it? I am still speechless from the supernatural force of your poem which I have been riding into my own locations. Travel well, Sherry.
DeleteBeautiful prompt! Just linked in my poem. Hoping to read all the lovely poems.
ReplyDeleteWelcome, Ramya. I'll see you out there in this weekly anthology!
DeleteHello everyone! Thanks for the wonderful prompt, Susan.
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed writing on it. Looking forward to read all the wonderful poems here :)
Glad to see you, Purba. Have a great day.
DeleteHello everyone. Please forgive me, as my post for this week's prompt is very personal and dark. Just hope, I have reached the standard, as last week.
ReplyDeleteYour post resounds! All poetry, I think, reaches out to others when you start with what you know. I'm happy to welcome you, Therisa.
DeleteHello everyone. Am late again...sorry! Lack of time is just an excuse. :) It's pretty late...so I need to come back tomorrow to read the other entries. Himalayan grandeur is breathtaking!
ReplyDeleteI hope all is well, Panchali! It's good to see you here.
DeleteSorry Im late the post was written but have been away all day.
ReplyDeleteThanks Susan for another fantastic prompt - I always marvel at the different peaks where people gather inspiration from.
You are not late. Welcome. Thanks for adding your peaks to the rest.
DeleteThis is a great prompt to begin with. I am truly excited. Thanks Susan.
ReplyDeleteWelcome, Mubeen. Thank you for joining us!
DeleteHello all:)
ReplyDeletea lil busy. So late.
mountain,
one of my favourite themes to introspect n write.
Hi All, This is my first time here and have posted my poem on my favourite mountain. Thank you so much Susan :-)
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