To My Wife in Mourning
bright day,still birds, black
spots on the blue sky, slightly
sway in trees, and wait
for winter to stay
or summer at last to come
like you’re waiting for
the pain to stop, death
to give way to the winter
sun’s soft, warm embrace.
spots on the blue sky, slightly
sway in trees, and wait
for winter to stay
or summer at last to come
like you’re waiting for
the pain to stop, death
to give way to the winter
sun’s soft, warm embrace.
Before the Funeral
Mountains
surround me.
Black ridges
scrape the sky.
Raw lacerations.
Gone are the songs of
hopeful winter birds,
gone to the mountains
of the sun.
In the valley of the moon,
bitter desolation.
surround me.
Black ridges
scrape the sky.
Raw lacerations.
Gone are the songs of
hopeful winter birds,
gone to the mountains
of the sun.
In the valley of the moon,
bitter desolation.
So incredibly beautiful, reflective of nature's beauty, and of hope, even through times of grief. The fact that Steven wrote all three of these poems in the same week, and that the poem following is so deeply loving, in a time of loss, causes me to tip my hat in profound respect to him, and make this the Poem of the Week:
Lovesong
I will be there always
even though you don't know me.
My life will shine in your eyes,
O child of my child.
With your small, quick breaths
I will breathe again,
and when you cry
my faithful heart will again break.
So look for me in the still, high trees;
the green brilliance of the winking sun
will be our secret signal.
You don't know me, but
your soul, your golden love,
your fears and hopes
I will keep safe in my heart,
and in the soft wind will I sing to you
O beautiful child.
I will guard you
as you play.
Look up at dancing spring clouds
and shout your joy skyward
to me!
even though you don't know me.
My life will shine in your eyes,
O child of my child.
With your small, quick breaths
I will breathe again,
and when you cry
my faithful heart will again break.
So look for me in the still, high trees;
the green brilliance of the winking sun
will be our secret signal.
You don't know me, but
your soul, your golden love,
your fears and hopes
I will keep safe in my heart,
and in the soft wind will I sing to you
O beautiful child.
I will guard you
as you play.
Look up at dancing spring clouds
and shout your joy skyward
to me!
Way to be a human being, Steven, and thank you for your participation at Poets United.
Utterly amazing, heart wrenching poetry.
ReplyDeleteThank-you for showcasing one of my favorite poets! Every. single. poem . he writes is gripping and powerful.
ReplyDeleteWonderful choices of poems, Sherry. Steven, these are indeed remarkable poems! As Sherry said, definitely reflective of the human journey.
ReplyDeleteSteven's poetry is new to me, but I will surely be back for more. the third poem, especially, your choice for the poem of the week, feels particularly hopeful to me, granting that there is life beyond life, that connection exists between those who have died and those not yet born.
ReplyDeleteThank you all so much! I am overwhelmed!
ReplyDeleteSteven Federle
Yes, very beautiful work!
ReplyDeleteEach poem more powerful and touching here. What a wonderful series of poems from an amazing poet.
ReplyDeleteWow Steven, these are amazing!
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Steven, this is incredibly beautiful writing.
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