“One loyal friend is worth 10 thousand relatives”
Famous best friends in literature
and media:
Hamlet
and Horatio
Celia
and Rosalind
Romeo
and Mercutio
Elizabeth and Charlotte
Elizabeth and Charlotte
Tom
and Huck
Butch and Sundance
Butch and Sundance
Calvin
and Hobbes
Charlotte
and Wilbur
Frodo
and Sam
Peter
Pan and Tinkerbell
Dorothy
and Toto
Pooh
and Piglet
Sherlock
Homes and Doc Watson
C3PO
and R2D2
Thelma
and Louise
Mary
and Rhoda
Laverne
and Shirley
Buffy
and Willow
Savannah,
Gloria, Bernadine and Robin
Abilene and Minny
I know you can add more names to this list, and hope you let me know who in your comments below. But your poem?
Midweek Motif ~ Best Friend
- Let your poem take you in a direction that doesn't name drop but is rich in experience.
- Dare I limit you to 80 words or less? I won't insist, but try. When I think of the role of a best friend's presence or absence in my life, in my father's life or in teams and military service, a lot of words come.
And when I listen to this sentimental song, I feel all mushy inside.
Here are three inspiring poems:
I found again in the heart of a friend.BY HENRY WADSWORTH LONGFELLOW (88 words)I shot an arrow into the air,
It fell to earth, I knew not where;
For, so swiftly it flew, the sight
Could not follow it in its flight.I breathed a song into the air,
It fell to earth, I knew not where;
For who has sight so keen and strong,
That it can follow the flight of song?Long, long afterward, in an oak
I found the arrow, still unbroke;
And the song, from beginning to end,
BY COLETTE LABOUFF ATKINSON (148 words)Before boys, Susan drove me to work, for teriyaki takeout on Manchester past Lincoln Boulevard. Inseparable, we planned winter and Easter vacations. In the stairwell, I tried to talk. She cut me off. Her echo was loud ....
(Read the rest of this prose poem HERE.)
Tableau by Countee Cullen (71 words)Locked arm in arm they cross the wayThe black boy and the white,The golden splendor of the dayThe sable pride of night.From lowered blinds the dark folk stareAnd here the fair folk talk,Indignant that these two should dareIn unison to walk.Oblivious to look and wordThey pass, and see no wonderThat lightning brilliant as a swordShould blaze the path of thunder.
Please:
1. Post your poem with it best friend motif on your site, and then link it here.
2. Share only original and new work written for this challenge.
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(Next week's Midweek Motif is Public Protest.)
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ReplyDeleteA bit of a twist.
You stopped my sonnet in its tracks :-)
Thank you for being here, Jo-hanna. Someday, that sonnet may find another ending. Meanwhile it speaks volumes.
DeleteWelcome to Midweek Motif, Poets! I'll be in and out today from my window seat on Amtrak from Philly up to Albany, NY. I'm throwing a suitcase together now to leave 30th Street Station at 10:55. Then I'll visit this evening from my Mom and Dad's house. Have a wonderful day thinking of Best Friends and creating something new for us, for you, and even for he or she ....
ReplyDeleteThanks Susan this inspired a poem after spending a week in hospice with my best friend's dad.
ReplyDeleteWhat a good friend you are!
DeleteI made it mid week!
ReplyDeleteGood to see you, Audrey.
DeleteThank you Susan for a wonderful prompt where feelings are profound and so much can be expressed You are yourself a poet's best friend -
ReplyDeleteAw, sweetness. Thank you.
DeleteHappy Mid-Week, fellow poets! Susan, I envy you the train trip, and that you have parents to visit, still. Wonderful that you see them so often. I am intrigued by the something new" you hint at.......I dashed off a short one. I have some very special best human friends. But when it comes to the one and only, that title goes to Pup, as always. Best friend I ever had.
ReplyDeleteI'm coming around to read now. The WIFI didn't work on Amtrak, so I'm writing from Upstate NY.
DeleteThis was a lot more fun with story characters!
ReplyDeleteMine is up at: https://purplepeninportland.wordpress.com/2014/05/28/hatter-n-hare/
If you don't want to do the Linky, you could simply paste your poem here.
DeleteThank you for the prompt it got me thinking of best friends and summer days of youth.
ReplyDeleteI love when that happens.
DeleteThanks for giving me feedback on the prompt .Strange is good.
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad I have a poem for this week's motif. The list of friends above was fun to read and remember. My faves are Dorothy and Toto; Tom and Huck; Calvin and Hobbes; C3P0 and R2D2...lol
ReplyDeleteGood to see you, James.
DeleteOf course we all immediately think of the best friend of our youth and I am no exception. So I wrote one from this prompt because I really didn't have anything already written that fits. I'm also happy that you chose this because it let me realize that there is something unresolved there for me. Perhaps I can find him . . .
ReplyDeleteWow! Go for it! Expect changes!
DeleteI deleted the last several comments that were individual concerns rather than Poets United. I let them ride in error. In future, rather than use The Poets United comment section, please work out problems with something an individual said privately through email or individual blogs. Let us know if there is a larger problem. And enjoy the diverse poetry of Poets United, letting us enjoy your own powerful contributions. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteSusan for Poets United
Saturday! I close this prompt to make room for Sunday's pantry. Consider posting Best Friend poems tomorrow too.
ReplyDeleteI'm new to Poet's United and am happy to be here reading the many interpretations of this prompt.
ReplyDeleteLovely poem from Henry Longfellow. This is a nice prompt.
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