I nabbed it for a Poem of the Week, and then we decided it would be interesting to have one of our poet chats about it. Enjoy the poem and the animated short - which is beautiful - and then join us by the fire for our chat.
Luna, bewitch the oppressors
who drench the earth with poison
who drench the earth with poison
that stills the bees’ flight
and leaves the garden barren.
Morning has grown silent:
Luna, bewitch the oppressors
pouring death into the wind
to rob honeycombs of gold.
Wildflowers no longer
turn the meadow into a bouquet.
Luna, bewitch the oppressors
who plunder the queen’s kingdom.
Please restore hope of another spring,
another summer, poppies touched
by velvet wings humming the song of life.
Luna, bewitch the oppressors.
©Susie Clevenger 2014
Sherry: Susie, I love this poem so much! And the beautiful video that accompanies it. Tell us what inspired it.
Luna and Shaman Rabbit
by Toril Fisher
Susie: The poem, Bewitch The Oppressors, was originally sparked by the painting, Luna and Shaman Rabbit by Toril Fisher. Her paintings on the lids of abandoned bee hives are not only beautiful, but make a statement on how humans have lost their connection with nature.
Huge companies now control much of the farmland and production of farming. Their practice of fertilizing with a 24d herbicide mixture containing 50% Agent Orange is senseless and, in my opinion, amounts to an act of war on all living things. This continued practice is causing the colony collapse of the European honey bee that pollinates many of the agricultural crops worldwide.
Sherry: Agent Orange! I didn't know that is what they used, though I was aware of the decline in bees due to pesticides. This is really criminal. I can't believe it is allowed.
Huge companies now control much of the farmland and production of farming. Their practice of fertilizing with a 24d herbicide mixture containing 50% Agent Orange is senseless and, in my opinion, amounts to an act of war on all living things. This continued practice is causing the colony collapse of the European honey bee that pollinates many of the agricultural crops worldwide.
an act of war on all living things
Susie: The word bewitch means to cast a spell on or gain control by magic. Throughout literature, the moon often is given the ability to bewitch. When I did some research I found information on moon planting, planting according to the lunar cycle. It is an ancient practice that is finding a contemporary resurgence.
Sherry: I have heard of that, too, and of communities such as Findhorn, in Scotland, where the gardens are magical, due to the humans working closely with, and listening to, the nature spirits. I am loving this conversation, Susie!
Susie: Nature is so much wiser than man and, upon seeing the rabbit Shaman in the painting, I thought how appropriate it was this creature of fertility would lift a prayer to the moon asking for humans to realize, if the bees die, so do they.
Sherry: Humans are taking such a long time to comprehend the magnitude of this truth.
Susie: When I was doing some research for the poem, I felt such grief. I question the sanity of humans, that would poison soil and kill the very thing that insures life is regenerated.
The lust for money blinds the soul, when it has no concern for the harm it perpetuates. I felt I needed to add my voice to the outcry at this atrocity. Thankfully, I also found many who are working to educate and petition industry to be more responsible.
Poetry often draws attention to the world's condition. I find myself writing more often with that thought in mind.
Sherry: Thank you for being that voice, Susie! And for inspiring us to add ours to the conversation.
Sherry: I have heard of that, too, and of communities such as Findhorn, in Scotland, where the gardens are magical, due to the humans working closely with, and listening to, the nature spirits. I am loving this conversation, Susie!
Susie: Nature is so much wiser than man and, upon seeing the rabbit Shaman in the painting, I thought how appropriate it was this creature of fertility would lift a prayer to the moon asking for humans to realize, if the bees die, so do they.
if the bees die, so do we
Sherry: Humans are taking such a long time to comprehend the magnitude of this truth.
Susie: When I was doing some research for the poem, I felt such grief. I question the sanity of humans, that would poison soil and kill the very thing that insures life is regenerated.
The lust for money blinds the soul, when it has no concern for the harm it perpetuates. I felt I needed to add my voice to the outcry at this atrocity. Thankfully, I also found many who are working to educate and petition industry to be more responsible.
Poetry often draws attention to the world's condition. I find myself writing more often with that thought in mind.
Kids, Susie has provided links to her interesting sources, for any of you who wish to learn more.
Bewitch The Oppressors
Toril Fisher Art
Moon Planting
Colony Collapse
Many thanks, Susie, for this chat, and for your long-time loyalty to and participation at Poets United. And for your wonderful poetry, which graces our lives and adds depth to our days. Kids, I know you are aware that there are reams of wonderful poems to enjoy in Susie's archives. One could wander happily in there for hours.
Come back and see who we feature next, kids. Who knows? It might be you!
I enjoyed the chat between two poets. It is true that we need bees as bees keep life
ReplyDeletehumming. I have enjoyed many of Susie's poems. Thanks ladies for letting me in on
the conversation.
Thank you so much.
Deletecool verse susie...and thanks to sherry for pointing it out
ReplyDeletehaven't seen susie in a while...
Poetry often draws attention to the world's condition
hoe very true...and as ones that notice i would say it our responsibility as poets to draw attention to those things...
Thanks Brian...I have been writing. I just don't seem to get to all the places on the web I would like to. I keep trying to shine a light on the things I am passionate about.
DeleteI agree, Brian - Susie's poem speaks to a serious problem, and her research added info I might not otherwise have been aware of. It is hard to remain hopeful , the more we come to know. But I do think adding our poetic voices helps to spread awareness, at least.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sherry for inviting me to sit down and chat. It is hard to remain hopeful, but hope we must. It is with hope we step out. I have learned so much in the past few years about living with hope when my personal world has been hit with hard knocks.
DeleteAmen. AND LOVE THE POEM ANDTHE NEW FORMAT.
ReplyDeleteThanks Susan...I am so happy to be part of it.
Deletea beautiful and strong voice of a poet here Susie....our present time is in need of the voice...thank you Sherry for featuring Susie and her blog...
ReplyDeleteThank you Sumana...I do try and speak out on issues that I feel strongly about.
DeleteA poem with a strong and important message, Susie. Sherry, really enjoyed the conversation you had with Susie over this poem. It is good sometimes to reflect on the world's condition and also on ways to improve it.
ReplyDeleteThank you Mary....
DeleteWhat a good thing to do- to bring your voice to such a vital issue. Thanks to Susie for this fine poem and may it be so.
ReplyDeleteThank you Mary. We just can't sit back and be silent or not try and so what we can to work for change.
DeleteLovely conversation in here, so nice to find this morning as I sit at my desk plotting my day. Thank you so much, Susie, for this poem and chat. And you are right, without hope we are truly lost, so we must - as I always say - live in hope!
ReplyDeleteSherry, thank you so much for asking me to take part in the chat.
Deletean appropriate post on Earth Day. a lovely poem and timely message.
ReplyDeleteecosystems can be fragile. it can be like a domino line, one tile falls and the rest follows. :(
Thank you.
DeleteI enjoyed your poem, Susan. Great message, form and rhythm. Sherry, thank you for featuring it for us on Earth Day.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Gabriella.
DeleteWonderful conversation... and your site susie (your works) are just as interesting and filled with excellent pieces of art and words. :-)
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Thank you. I try to communicate visually as well as through my poetry.
DeleteInformative and extremely scary.
ReplyDeleteThe small family farms must remain or we will never survive.
So true Gail. I have such admiration for small family farmers. They are so vital to us.
DeleteWe need a return to the family farm. But factory farming will do all it can to prevent it, sadly. Small farms are the way back to a world more in balance, for humans and animals. And plants and bees, for that matter!
DeleteDeeply interesting informative and engrossing Chat.Thank you Sherry for such a wonderful knowledgeable conversation. Bees played a part in my life when my son then 8 years old was caught in a disturbed swarm. We lost and found him after 4 hours.Prayers and a miracle saved him. Unforgettable incident.
ReplyDeleteThat must have been truly frightening. Am thankful prayers saved him. A miracle indeed, especially given the length of time from the attack.
DeleteIntense imagery a reminder of Keats in the poem' words like 'drench' and poison' and 'rob' denote the level of 'treachery and destruction of nature'...very well expressed.Best wishes Dear Poet Susie for more beautiful poetry.
ReplyDeleteThank you Anjum...
DeleteWhat a wonderful exchange of views. A delight to read. Thank you Susie and Sherry.
ReplyDeleteThank you Jo-anna. Sherry is the best when it comes to an interview.
DeleteIt is truly my pleasure, my friends. These chats are a kind of cool new direction. I am enjoying them very much!! And of course this topic is so close to my heart.
DeleteA very beautiful poem, which at the same time perfectly expresses the seriousness of the situation. I enjoyed the chat too, which lent added depth to the whole thing. I too was unaware that Agent Orange was being used, though I knew the pesticide was destroying bees. Yes, appalling greed and insanity!
ReplyDeleteThanks Rosemary. The more I researched the topic the scarier I found it. So thankful I found people who are working to bring change and hope the bees can be saved.
DeleteThanks so much Loredana.
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