by Robert Frost When the spent sun throws up its rays on cloud
And goes down burning into the gulf below,
No voice in nature is heard to cry aloud
At what has happened.
Birds, at least must know
It is the change to darkness in the sky.
Murmuring something quiet in her breast,
One bird begins to close a faded eye;
Or overtaken too far from his nest,
Hurrying low above the grove, some waif
Swoops just in time to his remembered tree.
At most he thinks or twitters softly, 'Safe!
Now let the night be dark for all of me.
Let the night be too dark for me to see
Into the future.
Let what will be, be.
Wooo hoooo its time for midweek motif once again and I miss Susan so much during this time of the week! Hope she joins us soon.. sharing my poem "Acceptance".. tried a new form this week "Echo verse", hope you all like it :D
Thank you for opening the accepting doors of midweek motif - you are good enough is a good thing to hold in our hearts - excited about next weeks prompt also...thank you and happy Wednesday to all
A wonderful topic. One of my favorites. Enjoyed writing for this poem. Now, time to read all the beautiful poems of my fellow poets. And Susan, get well soon. We all miss you.
I hope you are feeling an improvement after your recent surgery. Sending my best wishes to you.... I wrote my poem about acceptance and then forgot to link it here...Now fixed!! Eileen
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Acceptance is interesting in that I find some that preach it the hardest and who you imagine should be the most accepting are often the least.
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ReplyDeleteWooo hoooo its time for midweek motif once again and I miss Susan so much during this time of the week! Hope she joins us soon.. sharing my poem "Acceptance".. tried a new form this week "Echo verse", hope you all like it :D
Lots of love,
Sanaa
Sanaa that was a really cool form. As I said on your page I will Def give it a try.
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DeleteThank you for opening the accepting doors of midweek motif - you are good enough is a good thing to hold in our hearts - excited about next weeks prompt also...thank you and happy Wednesday to all
ReplyDeleteAnother interesting topic today...thinking of you Susan...
ReplyDeleteI have always liked Niemöller's quote! Good topic today, I think.
ReplyDeleteA wonderful topic. One of my favorites. Enjoyed writing for this poem. Now, time to read all the beautiful poems of my fellow poets. And Susan, get well soon. We all miss you.
ReplyDeleteA very good topic......am interested to see the form Sanaa used, have not heard of it...I love how open you are to trying new forms, Sanaa.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Sherry, I enjoy trying out new forms and expanding my writing skills :D
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A topic that can go so many different ways - thanks for another challenge. Happy Wednesday to wonderful poets!
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DeleteThank you for the prompt - it's given me a chance to work with and process my acceptance of a loved one's illness,which was diagnosed last week.
ReplyDeleteThis was a challenging topic but was fun to write about. Hope you all have a great week.
ReplyDeleteSusan thank you for the prompt, it seemed to come at a perfect time? xoxoxo
ReplyDeleteMartin Niemoeller's quote is a favourite. Good to hear you are recovering well from your op Susan. Looking forward to your return.
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ReplyDeleteI hope you are feeling an improvement after your recent surgery. Sending my best wishes to you....
I wrote my poem about acceptance and then forgot to link it here...Now fixed!!
Eileen
Better late than never, I trust! :-) Good prompt, Susan; thanks for setting it up.
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