And sometimes it’s better to counsel with our hearts
alone.
I have found that pink buds are perfect within
and destined to open.
Perhaps it’s the inclusion of personal pronouns
in daily life–
of singular I, me
and plural we, us.
A few more days of warmth and it would bloom
one need only be patient.
alone.
I have found that pink buds are perfect within
and destined to open.
Perhaps it’s the inclusion of personal pronouns
in daily life–
of singular I, me
and plural we, us.
A few more days of warmth and it would bloom
one need only be patient.
Even cherries as luscious as lips bear secrets,
no matter how swift we wish to extract
its nectar
ease out carefully using a chopstick
and the pit should fall through into the bottle.
no matter how swift we wish to extract
its nectar
ease out carefully using a chopstick
and the pit should fall through into the bottle.
As soon bathe in eucalyptus mineral bath salt
let go of the past
it’s searing worries and pain augmented
there are few things in this world that are better left
unsaid.
let go of the past
it’s searing worries and pain augmented
there are few things in this world that are better left
unsaid.
Yet, twilight disappeared over the horizon
the last vestiges of gutsy purple
robbing me of what little courage I had left
I stand with my soul stripped for the perusal of night.
the last vestiges of gutsy purple
robbing me of what little courage I had left
I stand with my soul stripped for the perusal of night.
This poem after several years of growing up
and wisdom
shall laugh and ponder upon with unrestrained tears
cherishing every moment.
*A tribute response to Jane Hirsfield’s poem, and wisdom
shall laugh and ponder upon with unrestrained tears
cherishing every moment.
“Poem Holding Its Heart In One Fist.”
Sanaa: Sigh.. I remember this poem as if it was written yesterday. It was in
response to Kerry's Challenge: Instructions for Living a Life ~ A Tribute to
Poets of Our Time at Imaginary Garden with real toads.
"Poem Holding Its Heart In One Fist," was inspired by JaneHirsfield's poem of the same name and is a glimpse of my subconscious. It's
everything I believe about writing poetry and maturing as a person with
time.
These are lonely times we are living in, Sherry. An era where sorrow
cannot name its friend. I personally feel that social media is somewhat
responsible in disintegrating several aspects of life. People nowadays
(especially the youth) have no sense of regard for personal interaction
other than spending a ludicrous amount of time chatting on the internet.
Moreover, it's a rare thing if a person enjoys a simple meal at the dining
table without being immersed in a smartphone.
Keeping that in mind I associate blooming of pink buds and personal
growth with warmth and attention. One need only possess a kind heart and the
rest is assured.
As the poem progresses the words and their accompanying emotions become
more personal, as I seek to explore my innermost feelings regarding growing up
and life. There are moments of reflection and vulnerability, hence the reference
to "soul stripped for the perusal of night."
Why do we write poetry? There are many answers to this question. But I,
as a person who is young and has yet a lot to experience, believe that poetry is
equivalent to therapy and healing. We write because we can no longer hold the
words inside. I know for a fact that I will cherish and laugh heartily at my
work ten years later. I will whisper in my heart; "every poem that you
wrote blazed your path and instilled your faith in life which in turn just keeps
getting better and better."
Sherry: So true, "we write because we can no longer hold the words inside." And our poems chart our path, for sure. Thank you, Sanaa.
Let's see what Sumana has to say about poets and the art of poetry.
Let's see what Sumana has to say about poets and the art of poetry.
Winter birds have all come-
The pond is full
With water, tree-shadows and fish-
The blue sky seems dreamy,
So are the night stars-
Things of beauty,
Scattered everywhere
Like a Mary Oliver page-
Yet there’s an uncanny calm-
Where’s the ecstasy gone
With the “luminous fruits”,
“emerald eddies”, “lean owls”
“egrets”, “daisies” and all……
When I close my eyes
I see ‘red’
What’s burning, methinks-
A fire in a forest in a faraway land
Or a heart?
An ear of mine catches a note-
Is it a dirge in the woods?
May be-
A poet is gone-
*Words in inverted commas are from Mary Oliver’s Poems
Sherry: Sigh. Nature's beauty, spilling down the page. I love this, Sumana.
Sumana: Mary Oliver was one poet who asked us to be astonished, to stay amazed about life. She writes, in her poem “When Death Comes,” “I want to say all my life / I was a bride married to amazement”. A nature lover, she has opened our eyes to the immensity of our surroundings. She helps us see the hidden pattern of the world in her simple language. Her critics sneered at her ‘simplistic’, ‘plain’ language and 'easy accessibility' to her poems by one and all. But she stuck to her own beautiful style and enriched poetry. When such a person dies the world seems bereft of beauty. My immediate reaction was an immense sadness. This little poem of mine is a kind of homage to this poet seer. I tried to include as many of her own words from her poems I could to embellish my own poem.
Sherry: It is a beautiful homage, Sumana. Mary Oliver's words will stand, long after the voices of her critics have been silenced. Thank you for this gorgeous poem.
I knew when Rajani penned the following poem that I must share it. Let's read.
JUST MATH
Even Rumi, who could fit the entire
universe inside his poem, was yearning
for the grace of the Beloved. The universe
is not enough. It cannot love us the way
we want love. Its miracles are just math.
What would language do, or poems, if
the poet did not suffer the anguish of
loving a sunset? The sky just is. The poem
reaches out to touch your cheek. The
words wipe your tears. The poet burns
in the orange light until he becomes the
darkness. The Beloved holds back the
wine. Love is only an empty tavern, the
sun has been extinguished and the stars
in the window will be gone by morning.
universe inside his poem, was yearning
for the grace of the Beloved. The universe
is not enough. It cannot love us the way
we want love. Its miracles are just math.
What would language do, or poems, if
the poet did not suffer the anguish of
loving a sunset? The sky just is. The poem
reaches out to touch your cheek. The
words wipe your tears. The poet burns
in the orange light until he becomes the
darkness. The Beloved holds back the
wine. Love is only an empty tavern, the
sun has been extinguished and the stars
in the window will be gone by morning.
Sherry: Such a beautiful poem, Rajani! A poet does feel "the anguish of loving a sunset" and, through her words, the reader feels that ache too. I love that the poem dries our tears.
Rajani: Thanks so much for featuring my poem, Sherry. I wrote about 40 poems in what I called the “Universe Series” around December-January. This was one of them. They are all centred around the relationship of the individual with the universe– existential, spiritual or arbitrary. Rumi is probably more metaphor here than actual reference, but I’m not sure how the poem actually came about. I wasn’t really planning each poem, just going with the flow. I’ve posted a few poems on my blog and on Instagram but have no idea what to do with the rest!
Sherry: We are very happy to be reading your work, Rajani. Thank you for this very wonderful poem. I love thinking of the poet burning in an orange light.
Thank you, poet friends, for your wonderful words. We appreciate them very much.
We hope you enjoyed this feature, my friends. Do come back and see who we talk to next. Who knows? It might be you!
Thank you, poet friends, for your wonderful words. We appreciate them very much.
We hope you enjoyed this feature, my friends. Do come back and see who we talk to next. Who knows? It might be you!
I remember these poems and love all three of them - and the wonderful poets who wrote them. Thank you for sharing them again!
ReplyDeleteMy pleasure, Kim. I never have to look far to find wonderful poems for this feature.
DeleteThank you so much, Kim!❤️
DeleteThank you so much for featuring us this week, Sherry!❤️ It's always a pleasure to learn how our fellow poets feel about poetry.
ReplyDeleteSumana: I love the sensitivity with which your poem is penned. It speaks eloquently about the power and simplicity of words and is a lovely tribute to Mary Oliver. Especially love; "What’s burning, methinks- A fire in a forest in a faraway land or a heart?"
Rajani: This is a gorgeous, gorgeous poem and I love the imagery that describes and speaks of a poet's needs. These lines especially stood out for me; "The poet burns in the orange light until he becomes the darkness."
In the words of Sylvia Plath; "Poetry is my deepest health." Sigh I couldn't agree more!❤️
Thanks for taking part, Sanaa. The subject of poetry is of endless fascination to we poets. Smiles.
DeleteThree lovely poets with each a unique and beautiful message!Love,Nature,Universe 💝🌷🌎 Loved these poems and background. Thank you for sharing this Sherry!
ReplyDeleteAnd thank you for your love and kindness, Carrie!❤️
DeleteLovely you stopped by, Carrie. So nice to see you.
ReplyDeleteA wonderful set of poets, and poems...
ReplyDeleteThanks Bjorn!❤️
DeleteThree of my favourite poets, each with her own distinctive voice – and I love what each has to say here about poetry, in poetry. Thanks to you all, and to Sherry, for this post which has uplifted and enriched me at the start of my day.
ReplyDeleteRajani, may I suggest you create a chapbook from those poems? And perhaps from other series such as the city poems, too.
Thanks so much, Rosemary. Fingers crossed, someday soon, a book of sorts! Am trying to figure out the best way to get things published from here. Sherry- I do look forward to that!!! Thank you!
DeleteThank you so much, Rosemary!❤️ I am so glad you enjoyed it.
DeleteA wonderful idea, Rosemary - and we can feature it when it comes out. Smiles.
ReplyDeleteI am so delighted to have read these three beautiful poets. They each cite known poets I love and have written such insightful and beautiful poems . I've been going through a long "dry spell" as far as writing. I feel inspired now and am grateful to Sanaa, Sumana and Rajani for sharing their inspirational words.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sherri for featuring these three talented and sensitive poets.
Thank you so much, Myrna! Your words warm my heart ❤️
DeleteThis post was a pleasure to read! What a splendid collaboration! Lovely poems and an illuminating conversation, with three wonderful poets who are so supportive of our community of poets, here at Poets University - as are you, Sherry (for making so many good things - such as this - happen). Thanks so much Sanaa, Rajani and Sumana - and, of course, Sherry - for this scintillating share.
ReplyDeletePoets United - not Poets University - though what an intriguing slip, given the focus of this weeks post. ~ smiles ~
DeletePoets University .. not bad haha .. seems suitable as we learn so much from one another. Thank you for reading, Wendy! I am glad you enjoyed it ❤️
DeletePoets University....we'll take it. LOL. Thanks, Myrna and Wendy.....so happy you enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Sherry. Being part of PU has been enriching, educative and fun. Thank you all for your kind words and constant support.
ReplyDeleteIt's a pleasure being featured alongside you, Rajani!❤️
DeleteI am grateful to have talented poets to feature. Thanks so much for taking part.
DeleteThank you, thank you, thank you Sherry for featuring my poem with Sanaa and Rajani's. At PU we're definitely in the 'days of warmth' to quote Sanaa and I have experienced how 'The poem / reaches out to touch your cheek. The / words wipe your tears." as Rajani puts it out so beautifully.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Sumana for your kind and loving words!❤️
DeleteI love "the words wipe your tears".....sigh. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem, Sumana.
DeleteWow Sanaa, a beautiful piece of tantalising textual texture !
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Akshay! I am so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
DeleteWow what a treasure to read these poems from Saana, Sumana and Rajani. An inspirational way to start the day Nice to see the photos and read some background information Thanks Sherry Back to work now
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Marja ❤️ I am pleased that you enjoyed it!
DeleteThanks for stopping by, Marja! So lovely to see you.
ReplyDeleteDear Sherry What a beautiful touching striking collection of poetical thoughts. A pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing the great expressions of gifted writers Saana Sumana and Rajani. Long Live PU.
ReplyDeleteAwww thank you so much, Anjum ❤️ that's high praise from one who is so talented herself.
DeleteOh wow, 3 poetesses who do well to claim the well deserved status and title. I visit these 3 writers often and am always blown away by there work. Happy to see them in a bunch here. Thanks Sherry for the up close
ReplyDeleteMuch🌻love
Thank you so much, Gillena for your kind words, love and support!❤️
DeleteThank you all for the kind comments. I wish wordpress and blogger would work better together so we can share more poems than we link. I can't thank you all enough for all the poetry and love.
ReplyDeleteGoodness, I am in awe. Three talented poets, three amazing poems..Thank you ladies for your talent, for your inspiration, for your poetry. Sherry, thank you for placing three gifted poets in one place for us to enjoy.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Susie! ❤️ xoxoxo
DeleteThis has been a week of busy silence--no poetry came to me. So I am doubly grateful for these insights and images. Wow. My next Midweek Motif is "Writing poetry" in honor of April and poetry month. I will be quoting these poems.
ReplyDeleteAwww gosh! Thank you so much, dear Susan ❤️ I am hosting that day too so I'll be there merging both our prompts. Yayy!❤️
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