Jennifer and her family live in the Pacific North-West, where Jennifer writes, takes care of her "hero-husband and wonderful family." Here is her very moving work, this week's Poem of the Week:
There Go I, Dancing Broken
she said
she was drying out
and needed to get clean
i just held her hand
as she wept
holding her hair back
while she threw up
nearly 20 years
of the most hideous
and sobering regrets
and, like natural childbirth,
there is not much you can do
but be there
while she learns how
to nurture a new life beyond it
and remind her
even if you’re walking broken
you can learn how to dance again
Copyright © 2013 Jennifer Wagner
Recently, I also came upon this most beautiful poem of Janet Martin's, so lyrical and lovely. Here is a second offering, for your enjoyment.
Twilight Rhapsody
Beneath his moody murmur and caress
Softly she comes surrendering her lilt
Of azure glance and golden sun-flecked dress
To lie where cobalt shadow-song is spilt
All day he waited as her overture
Wove mystery to history; but now
He drapes his crushing longing over her
And smooths life’s ruthless laugh-lines from her brow
Out past the fields where tree-tops touch the sky
The vesper croons its burnished lullaby
The wheel from which her gossamer is spun
Replenishes its thread with somber hues
The filament of moments in the sun
Deepens to shrouds of midnight-tinted blues
Yet, he does not excuse his solemn trance
But softly wraps her in his muted hush
He gathers her into a gentle dance
Kissing her wantonness; horizons blush
As on the fringe of yesterday and dawn
A molten glow erupts; then it is gone
Beneath the vault where love and life unfold
She lays aside her tattered, tear-stained gown
Relinquishing her being to his hold
How tenderly he watches her lie down
The hour of her gallantries subside
Within the candor of his raw embrace
Somewhere the fringe of earth and sky collide
But darkness spills its sigh across her face
And now against his brawny chest she sleeps
He strums the air as star-song fills the deeps
© Janet Martin
Do visit Janet's site, kids. You'll find many wonderful poems by this poet, who describes herself as "a lover of moments in the music of life."
Thanks, Jennifer, for the compassion and emotion in your poems, and for being a part of Poets United. And thank you, Janet, as well, for your amazing contributions to our poetic treasury!
Dancing Broken really speaks to me and to so many people, I'd imagine. It is a witness for so many of us. Thanks.
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really amazing! what I think I appreciate most about this is the pure honesty, helplessness, lack of judgment, hope and love all wrapped in layers that the reader can easily peal off one by one to reveal and understand what some friends and family have trouble grasping when someone they love is suffering from addiction.
ReplyDeleteI have really become a fan of Jennifer's work, Sherry. She is a very talented poet, and what's more is one of the poets here who truly believes in reciprocity as far as commenting. (And, believe me, I notice that.) And yes, Jennifer, even if a person dances 'broken' it is possible to dance again!
ReplyDeleteThis poem really spoke to me, Jennifer, as I know very well the effects of addiction, especially on those near and dear who care about the one suffering. I love the compassion and the "being there" of the narrator. Truly, it is a gift to simply be there with someone in such pain.
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ReplyDeleteThanks for spotlighting this poem of mine Sherry. This piece is very personal to me and I teared up when I saw you had chosen it. I’m also honored to share the spotlight with Janet Martin who is amazing! Love her most talented work. I’m grateful to be part of such a wonderful community of talented poets!
I also wanted to say regarding my poem that if you are a person struggling to move past addiction, I hope you are not doing so alone and that you have a support system. But if you do or don’t yet have a friend to ‘hold your hair back’ so to speak, I want to say: be a friend to yourself. Don’t give up on yourself, condemnation and discouragement will come, but don’t give up.
Fall down, get up…dance again.
wonderfully exposed. 'Dances with Vodka' said it well. I agree with you Mary
ReplyDeleteThank you Jennifer; Gracias Sherry
I loved this poem when I read it on her blog. I think she is the most exciting new poet I have found in ages. She has a particular knack for really amazing endings. I'm a big fan.
ReplyDeleteJennifer is one of my favorite poets. Her work is so well crafted, heartfelt with a voice tender yet powerful. I love this poem which so aptly describes the power of addiction as well as the struggle so many face in trying to overcome it. The last line, so full of hope. Wonderful!
ReplyDeleteAdd my name to the list of Jennifer's fans. She has an uncanny ability to address challenging topics without bravado or aggression. She weaves an honest tale and ties up the loose ends.
ReplyDeleteBoth are just gorgeous writing---Thank you!
ReplyDeleteI also love the artistry and flow of Janet's poem. What a pleasure reading them both. Thank you!
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Sherry, thank-you for being a warrior in the world of poetry, and for your ever-encouraging voice! We love and appreciate you so much. Thank-you for showcasing Jennifer's work! She is one of my personal fav's! I agree with Kim!
ReplyDeleteJanet is a wonderful writer whose work I greatly admire. This particular poem is quite beautiful with a lovely flow.
ReplyDeleteLots of great information and inspiration, both of which we all need, thanks for all the enthusiasm to offer such helpful information here.
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I'm feelin' the love! Thank you all so much. Your words are so encouraging. And I second your words Janet--thank you Sherry! We (heart) you!
ReplyDeleteCongrats Jennifer n' Janet....two of my favorite poets :D
ReplyDeleteBoth poems and poets are so deserving of this recognition. I get great pleasure in reading them both. Well done Poets.
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