Verse First ~ The Red Wheelbarrow
Welcome to Verse First, where simple notions prompt amazing poems.
Today's notion?
THE RED WHEELBARROW
Mary Oliver, in her oft-referred-to A Poetry Handbook and Natalie Goldberg in Writing Down the Bones, each dedicate a number of pages to the reading and discussion of William Carlos Williams' sweet, simple-yet-complex poem The Red Wheelbarrow.
Only eight lines long, this poem teaches volumes. Every word has both literal and figurative meaning. The design of the piece adds impact. The lack of punctuation is purposeful and significant.
Your assignment? Read The Red Wheelbarrow, then write an eight line poem of your own whose simplicity is equally complex. Post the finished work on your site, then link up here. Be sure to give feedback to other participants. Can't wait! ~K
The Red Wheelbarrow
William Carlos Williams
so much depends
upon
a red wheel
barrow
glazed with rain
water
beside the white
chickens
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Hey, Poets United, HARD! and essential. I wish I could have managed colors too. The Red Wheelbarrow, the white chickens--so rich and rewarding.
ReplyDeleteLoved Williams' poem, Kim; I had never read it. As for mine, it's my best attempt, but this was difficult, if only because of the call for brevity! Thanks so much. Amy
ReplyDeleteSo much said in Williams' poem, I really found it a challenge to write something in response, especially in eight lines. A very thought provoking prompt.
ReplyDelete...a lovely poem Kim... though i got a bit confused... are we suppose to write our own version of the poem 'The Red Wheelbarrow' in 8 lines? or write only a poem in 8 lines for any subject/s? anyhow, i went for the latter.... hihi... smiles...
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ReplyDeleteA difficult prompt this week, but I wrote what was inside my head at the time...Prompted by the clever prompt.
Eileen
have always like this Williams verse, and have tried to emulate it many times.
ReplyDeletelittle confusing, yet tried my level best!
ReplyDeleteBrevity without the levity; nice work, if you can GET it!
ReplyDeleteI will write to this, later today, kids. My week whapped me upside the head, I am way overloaded. But this evening is MINE and I will be back. Great intriguing prompt, as always, Kim.
ReplyDeleteHa. One popped into my head. I will be back to comment later today, kids. Yippee!
ReplyDelete8 lines it is! a bit different though and hope it stands up to the theme! Thanks Kim! ll be back soon to catch the others here
ReplyDeleteI tried to work with the theme, Kim. It's difficult...but, I have that never-say-die fighting spirit. LOL..
ReplyDeleteShall come back to read others later..:)Thanks!
Know I am late, but was interested in this particular prompt, but busy with other things. When I finally got some free time, realized I had already done the prompt last weekend with a wordle. Whew!
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2013/07/28/after-the-storm/
The Red Wheelbarrow, a favourite of mine :-) Difficult prompt; tried.
ReplyDeleteEvidently it has given many of us a deeper appreciation of Williams's deceptively simple piece! I am no exception. Well worth attempting, though.
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